PatriciaA

Username: PatriciaA

About Me

I'm french canadian from Quebec. I've been singing since I'm very young. I've always wanted to write my own songs. For many years, I've been focussing on creating arts and crafts but there's missing another side of me. I've written lots of journals with many song ideas but all the pieces are scattered. I'm hoping that collaborating with songwriting will help open new doors and give me the push I need to get into the creative flow and finish songs of my own. And it would be fantastic of course if some of my lines would be chosen in a collaboration. Either way, it's a win win situation..! This is me covering Rodney Crowell's song ''Til I gain control again": https://youtu.be/eh5d0MDo9iY

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  • Beth Nielsen Chapman

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on PatriciaA's lyric:

"this first line isn't quite there but you are on to something! it definitely feels like "A - - - - -" instead of "is a - - -" we want to set up a list...I also love singing in the night and the next line...really close..."

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Lyric by PatriciaA:

"A little bitty lark / singing in the night / echoes through the dark / the notion that I might..."

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on PatriciaA's lyric:

"this first line isn't quite there but you are on to something! it definitely feels like "A - - - - -" instead of "is a - - -" we want to set up a list...I also love singing in the night and the next line...really close..."

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Lyric by PatriciaA:

"A little bitty lark / singing in the night / echoes through the dark / the notion that I might..."

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on PatriciaA's lyric:

"dancing in the night is cool...but "A glimmering SPARK" the accents fall weird. "

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Lyric by PatriciaA:

"A glimmering spark / dancing in the night / bursting through the dark"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on PatriciaA's lyric:

"I like "bursting through the dark"...explore that....what are some other words that work instead of bursting???"

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Lyric by PatriciaA:

"A glimmering spark / rises like a kite / bursting through the dark"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on PatriciaA's lyric:

"Mountains apart from what? Just a little unclear..."

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Lyric by PatriciaA:

"Standing mountains apart (4th line)"

My Lyrics

Written for:

  • Beth Nielsen Chapman
I See green / You keep saying yellow / I flap my wings /And you touch the ground / I can take it slow / And promise I won't be far behind / 'Cause I'll never gonna to change your mind

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It could take years / Better not depend on / The words I hear / Spin round and round / But I'll hold on / And see you under clearer skies / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind

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It might take long / Better not expect it (or better not depend on) /I must be strong / Keep hope (love, faith) alive / Walk that bridge / Underneath a starry sky (or night) / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind
I'll be strong / You can be the winner / (It) Can't be wrong /When it feels right / I'll steer my wheels / And keep on shining through the night / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind
(First twk lines) I'll be strong / You can be the winner
So let's recap / Blow away confusion / Good or bad / No reason to fight /We're on our path / to bring about the best in life / And I'm never gonna change your mind / Still I try, try, try...
(First two lines) So I show my cards / Lay 'em on the table (Happy Mother's Day!) :)
So I give and take / Meet you in the middle / Bend or break / Turn a blind eye (or "brush it aside") / Lie awake / Underneath a moonlit sky / But I'm never gonna change your mind
So I unpack my fears / Lay it on the table / Cut the frills / Let it all slide / Beat my drum / Somewhere under clear blue skies / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind
So I lay it out clear / Elucidate this matter / Cut the frills / Let it hang down / Blow the fear / And reach out for the highest climb / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind
So I raise my veil / show you all the angles / lift my sails / throw you a line / meet you where / no one else could ever find / But I'm never gonna change your mind

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A tiny little star / singing in the night / whispers in the dark
A tiny little lark /singing in the night / whispers through the dark
A tiny little spark*/dancing in the light / shining through the dark* (*Not sure who owns credit)

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A little bitty lark / singing in the night / echoes through the dark / the notion that I might...
The glitter of a star / dancing in the light / echoes through the dark
A glimmering star / shining in the light / echo through the dark
Echo or shatter through the dark (last line edit)

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A glimmering spark / dancing in the night / bursting through the dark
A glimmering spark / rises like a kite / bursting through the dark
There's got to be change / Just around the corner / It might feel strange / Sometimes it takes a while / Love goes both ways /It's a healing circle we can't deny / But I'm never gonna change your mind
Last two lines: I can't pretend / that it's right when it's not in the end / And I'm never gonna...
When I lose myself / through the stormy weather / we're passersby / like two ships in the night / I can't pretend / that I'm happy when it's raining inside / And I'm never gonna change your mind

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When I lose myself / through the stormy weather / we're passersby / like two ships in the night / but what never ends / is all the love that I have inside / And I'm never gonna change your mind
So I packed my case / headed for the Suncoast / I need a break / See the clear blue sky / There's no use stayin' / But I'll never be too far behind / And I'm never gonna change your mind
I dream of a place / we could work it over / inside the gates / of our aching hearts / a warm embrace / feeling like we're on cloud nine / But I'll never gonna change your mind...
(Verse 4 - 3rd line edit) Sometimes when the grey skies clear / or when the storm clouds clear

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Suggestions for 3rd line (4th verse): But when I see the truth shine clear (or truth so clear)/ OR sometimes when the sky is clear (since the word truth was already used in previous verse)
But when I'm feeling sure and clear
Well, I could fall down on my knees / Waiting we come closer day by day / our love is such a mystery / every burn reminds me to be brave
Line 1 & 3 ideas: I'll be serious, you be the clown / It's a game we play, a merry-go-round
Ideas for line 1 & 3: Well, I could go down on my knees / ta da ta da..... / our circle maze of mystery / ta da ta da....
Well, I'm never gonna let you down / I'll keep searching ways to reach your heart / And when a boulder hits the ground / We'll work it through and never be apart

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I see the maze we're circling through / I show you things that you don't want to see / But your love, I don't want to lose / It's hard to live without your family

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I could rant and rave / Try to win you over / I could live in a cave / Mountains apart / I could wait for change / It would only be a waste of time / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind

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Standing mountains apart (4th line)
Well, I could rant and rave / Try to win you over / Dig a cave / Mountains apart / I could wait for change / But it would only be a waste of time / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind!
Well, I could rant and rave / Try to win you over / da da da? /da da da da? / If I wait for a change / It would only be a waste of time / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind

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