10 responses to “The smell of rain, a flash of light / The scene is lit, turns back to night”

1. Walker Todd Davis says:

   July 31, 2014 at 7:27 am

   awesome job Robert!

2. Daniel Evans says:

   July 31, 2014 at 12:47 am

   Congrats Robert!

3. M. Ocho says:

   July 31, 2014 at 12:28 am

   Congrats!

4. Tod Hughes says:

   July 30, 2014 at 10:08 pm

   Congrats Robert!!!

5. Robert S. Hall says:

   July 30, 2014 at 9:46 pm

   Thank you very much. I love Brad’s changes. Collaboration at it’s finest. 🙂

6. Hamish Clarke says:

   July 30, 2014 at 9:45 pm

   i’ve noticed that the stress on the second syllable is forcing a lot of a’s, the’s and so on to start lines, because so many dang words are stressed on their first syllable.

7. Hamish Clarke says:

   July 30, 2014 at 9:44 pm

   well done, Robert!

8. Sarah Lopusnikova says:

   July 30, 2014 at 9:27 pm

   Congratulations!

9. Michael Clulow says:

   July 30, 2014 at 9:26 pm

   congrats 🙂 great line

10. Jerry Brace says:

    July 30, 2014 at 9:24 pm

    Congrats!!