jaynesachs

jaynesachs

Username: jaynesachs

jaynesachs

Username: jaynesachs

Jayne Sachs

Ohio
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  • One of Each
  • Gary Lucas
  • Marti Dodson
  • Beth Nielsen Chapman
  • Clay Mills
  • Marty Dodson
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Gary Lucas commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Nice!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"When the veins of the world bleed onto days of gold and we're painted and tainted with dark"

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Marti Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"I like the conversational tone of the first part of this!
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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I wouldn't be wishin' that things could be different"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Bingo on "tiny little"!! sings soooo good...but "Part" is weak. You could also sing "little tiny" which several folks have written...but I've been waiting for someone to choose "tiny little" because the long "i" in front lays so much better on the melody! See how precise it can be? Makes all the difference. Now. Tiny little what? "

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"(a) tiny little part / I know I can find / A switch ta hit that starts"

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Clay Mills commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Thanks for going back to the original rhyme scheme!

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"But we soaked in way more than that West Texas sun / Learnin’ how lovers come, how lover’s come undone"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"I like this, Jayne!

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"cuz life - could be crazy good to share (with)"

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Gary Lucas commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Nice!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"When the veins of the world bleed onto days of gold and we're painted and tainted with dark"

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Marti Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"I like the conversational tone of the first part of this!
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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I wouldn't be wishin' that things could be different"

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Marti Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Nice line Jayne!
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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"Can’t gather a minute and try to relive it / It’s all in the past time sure makes sure of that Like oceans will take castles down"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Bingo on "tiny little"!! sings soooo good...but "Part" is weak. You could also sing "little tiny" which several folks have written...but I've been waiting for someone to choose "tiny little" because the long "i" in front lays so much better on the melody! See how precise it can be? Makes all the difference. Now. Tiny little what? "

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"(a) tiny little part / I know I can find / A switch ta hit that starts"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"like how you did that internal rhyme with thumb and someone...!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I could bite my tongue / like it doesn't matter Twirl my thumbs / stay on my side Or be someone defending what I know is right"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"like a lot of this! last line accents don't line up with the melody..."

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I won't go numb / Pretend it doesn't matter / Turn and run / Cover my eyes / (or) come undone / Just when we need to unite"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"good stuff in here!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"In a world of black and white / Somehow all the gray has disappeared / How bout if we blur the lines / That's where love is gonna reappear"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Great feel on the first two lines...also opens up a whole more broad field...but the next lines don't scan on the melody in a way that is as strong as I could be. Because you have "maybe we'd find" hanging off the cliff in a way that's not conversational....and "you know the healing kind"...which healing kind of what? it's just a little murky...but good stuff in it!! "

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"If I could flip a switch / Light up all the darkness / Step on in / Maybe we'd find / Hope right there / You know the healing kind / But I'm never gonna change your mind"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Actually the melody on "maybe we'd find" goes down on the word find...which indicates to my ears that it's the end of a sentence. Kind of like "pass me the salt". And the "hanging" feeling is as if you were to say "pass me the" and salt is in the next sentence.
Hope that's not too confusing!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"If I could flip a switch / Light up all the darkness / Step on in / Maybe we'd find / Hope right there / You know the healing kind / But I'm never gonna change your mind"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"this is cool and different!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I'm never gonna change your mind / I'm not the blood runnin' through your veins"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"original and visual!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I’m never gonna change your mind / there’s no magic wand to wave for that"

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Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Nice visual! "

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I’m never gonna change your mind / Like the sun can’t touch the moon"

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Clay Mills commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Thanks for going back to the original rhyme scheme!

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"But we soaked in way more than that West Texas sun / Learnin’ how lovers come, how lover’s come undone"

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Clay Mills commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Jayne, save this stuff and let's see if you can get this concept into 2nd verse.

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"not a day that I'd re-do / I found my heart when it found you / ya left me but left me knowing that / ain't one kiss I'd take back"

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Clay Mills commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Internal rhymes and unique angle/idea for the song! 😃

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"She's Gonna Wanna Thank You (concept could be that everything he's learned will help his next relationship)"

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Clay Mills commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"She's Gonna Wanna Thank You (concept could be that everything he's learned will help his next relationship)"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"I like this, Jayne!

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"cuz life - could be crazy good to share (with)"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Love the simplicity of this. It feels real and honest!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I could get used to this each night ending with your kiss"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Good ideas, Jayne"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I - wanna know you by heart / This- could be just the start"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"I like this, Jayne!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"Love - never thought I'd find it/ You - led me right to it (or: into it)"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"I like this, but probably want to stay all positive about her."

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I -- thought my heart was dying you -- brought it back to life"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Cool thoughts in here, Jayne!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I wanna know you til I know you by heart Let’s start forever right here in my arms"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Really dig that opening line"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"Each time we kiss it's like the finest champaign/ The room spins a little you get to me that way"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Nice lines, Jayne!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"Let’s shut the curtains/ even block out the moon/ I'm lovin' concentratin' only on you"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"This is cool, Jayne! Way to work Mr. Webster in!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"There ain't no word/ Webster has shared/ For your kind of beauty /Yeah in my arms here/ you're someone so rare"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"This is really good, Jayne!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"I fall each time/you kiss me I swear/- there's gotta be magic in this midnight air/ you're someone so rare"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Cool stuff and fits the sexy vibe we have going!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"Someone so rare/ wanna know every part/and uncover em slow/ down to your beautiful heart"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"I like the "just ask my heart" piece. Thinking on this.

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"Someone so rare Deep in my arms Dreams do come true Just ask my heart"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Cool lines, Jayne!


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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"The heat we got going is meltin' these sheets / Your touch is golden whatcha doing to me"

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Marty Dodson commented on jaynesachs' lyric:

"Cool line, Jayne!"

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Lyric by jaynesachs:

"Musta been the wind but I thought it was your whisper"

Song Stats

My Lyrics

hookist my lyrics written
  • Morgan Myles
  • Community Song!
  • Darden Smith for SW:S
  • The Great Gary Lucas
  • Marti Dodson
  • Beth Nielsen Chapman
  • Clay Mills
  • Marty Dodson
One by one we can spread it/ and we can catch it
Borders and the lines are gettin' blurred / you feel my love and I can feel your hurt / I don't know your name / but now we're just the same / in our fears
Borders and the lines are gettin' blurred / you feel my love and I'm feeling your hurt / I don't know your name / but aren't we all the same /in our fears
I will know you're reaching in / Every breath I'm breathing in / I will carry you
I will move with memories / in my soul that’s where you’ll breathe
Did you train your eyes not to cry To soldier through and keep up the fight
The beat reminds us- to be beautiful thieves - beholden to stolen- moments
The rhythm of life - hidden hints of time - A second chance for second hands to slow it
And we drip- where we walk- til we are forced to crawl- from the ugly to become beautiful thieves
When the veins of the world bleed onto days of gold and we're painted and tainted with dark
When the wall grabs your back, up against the world like that, and nerves are creatures out of cracks coming after you
When the world feeds on you, takes your heart like a thief would do, gives you dark and leaves you darker still
And that's all that matters yeah I've learned what matters
and tomorrow's unknown, but one thing I do know
It's all been worth livin', but tomorrow's not a given
Every heartbeat reminds me/ It’s all just mystery/ Crystal balls aren’t for real but tomorrow will steal / 24 more hours from us
(Every heartbeat reminds me) / this all is a mystery / no crystal ball's gonna tell me what is coming/like a final goodbye
There’s so many behind me
Try to stop goodbyes from coming... but life is short
Pray we're together forever
Hear them in echos and let them sink in (I feel that when we learn to accept love back, it's a big step too.. might be a better way to say it, but that is the thought behind this line)
I’ll take every chance until there’s no what ifs
I’ll take all the chances til there’s no what ifs
Heal all the bruises and learn to forgive
Make only memories I want to relive
I'll notice the roses, slow down for sunsets
Let go of heartaches (heartbreaks) and learn to forgive
I wouldn't be wishin' that things could be different
Correction: I wouldn’t be wishin’, how things could be different / I’d know all of the roses cuz I would have chosen to breathe in each one that I found
I’d be sitting pretty, on a throne of my memories / I’d have no regrets and I wouldn't be fretting when the ocean will come knock it down
Each grain had a story, coulda been a memory /But I’ve taken for granted the days we’ve been granted / & even sand castles fall down
Each grain was a story, each moment a memory / I've taken for granted the days we've been granted / Even sand castles fall down
Can’t gather a minute and try to relive it / It’s all in the past time sure makes sure of that Like oceans will take castles down
Early years of family ties, learning love and lullabies / Turn into teenage tears / can't wait to get the hell outta there /
I was just a kid couldn't wait to grow up / Traded Barbies in for mascara and lace
A baby cries and starts the journey Before too long playin' tag and climbin' trees
But in the middle of your heart / hidden out of sight / (a) tiny little spark / peaking through a smile / Could this be the start (of)
a) Tiny little arc / beautiful and bright /hitting that mark starts... the notion etc..
(a) Tiny little arc / beautiful and bright / when I hit that mark (it's)
(a) tiny little part / I know I can find / A switch ta hit that starts
(a) little tiny part, that you can't disguise Ready to embark (on)
(a) little golden part/ In there intertwined / (and) ready to embark
There’s a golden part / I've seen many times/ Ready to embark (on)
There's a golden part / Always sees the light Ready to embark (on)
I could come undone, pulling' all my hair out or play dumb, just let it slide Neither one's gonna helps us mend these times
I could shut my mouth/ try to take the high road / Or call you out / keep up the fight / 0r figure how /love can conquer this divide
I could bite my tongue / like it doesn't matter Twirl my thumbs / stay on my side Or be someone defending what I know is right
Won't play dumb / Pretend it doesn't matter / Turn and run / (then) cover my eyes / Won't become / Someone who will just stand by
I won't go numb / Pretend it doesn't matter / Turn and run / Cover my eyes / (or) come undone / Just when we need to unite
If we keep on keeping score / if we only wanna say touche’ /
We don’t have to say touche’ / we don’t have to keep on keeping score / maybe take the side of faith / that humans can be civil once more
Lines are being drawn in the sand Seems like everyone is on a side Shouting from where we stand Maybe we'll start listening in time
The world is spinning crazy now / All of us just trying to hold on / If we could hit the brakes somehow / And listen to each other right or wrong /
In a world of black and white / Somehow all the gray has disappeared / How bout if we blur the lines / That's where love is gonna reappear
Can we remember how to smile / Maybe we can lighten up and try / Yeah it’s been a really long while / Hoping to convince you that I’m right
Can we remember how to smile / Maybe we can lighten up and try / Yeah it's been a really long while / Hoping to convince you that I'm right
Well I'm a darn (damn) good shot hit ya where you feel it / Ready or not I'm getting inside / Up to us if we're gonna close this great divide
Well, I could hold my breath / but blue's not my color / Can't you see (I'm) tryin' to survive / And not fall into this great divide / If I'm never gonna change your mind
The place I know the best / Better get it ready / Ready or not / (I'm) Gettin' inside / (Like a) soul tattoo / I'll be leavin' even if I'm / Never gonna change your mind
If I could jump on in you know I would go there sink or swim.. I'm not the quitting' kind what's that smile Baby do you think that I'm Never gonna change your mind
If I could flip a switch / Light up all the darkness / Step on in / Maybe we'd find / Hope right there / You know the healing kind / But I'm never gonna change your mind
I’m never gonna change your mind / Even if the wolf is right at the door
I'm never gonna change your mind / But the wolf is at the door
I'm never gonna change your mind / its got a soul of its own
I'm never gonna change your mind / I'm not the blood runnin' through your veins
I’m never gonna change your mind / (cuz) You’re the only one whose got a key
I'm never gonna change your mind / (cuz) You're the only keeper with a key
I'm never gonna change your mind I can only give you what you'll take of mine
I’m never gonna change your mind / like I can’t paint what’s running through your veins
I’m never gonna change your mind / there’s no magic wand to wave for that
Well I’m never gonna change your mind / Like the sun can’t change the moon
I’m never gonna change your mind / Like the sun can’t touch the moon
Well I'm never gonna change your mind / Like the moon can't change the sun
Found that picture from El Paso / you’re in the middle of a laugh
But you taught me to open up... feel not just touch
But we soaked in way more than that West Texas sun / Learnin’ how lovers come, how lover’s come undone
I don't think about how you left me for good Just the good ya left in me for sure
Takes a heart shakes it up for real and
Takes a heart shakes it up for real and
Jump started my heart I ain't lying / you left me but you left me smilin'
not a day that I'd re-do / I found my heart when it found you / ya left me but left me knowing that / ain't one kiss I'd take back
Or one night in your magic world / or one day of learning how to love a woman in every way
Ain’t one kiss I’d take back, girl / (or) one bit of your magic girl / cuz each day I learned how to love… a woman in every way
Ain't one kiss I'd take back, girl (or) one bit of your magic girl / cuz each day you taught me how to love... a woman in every way
Ain't one kiss I'd take back, girl (or) one bit of your magic girl
That may have been near the end but baby ever since then..
Even though it was long ago and our love stayed in the past
Even though it was long ago and we didn’t grow together..
From the best of times.. to the worst goodbye... to my reasons why
From those happy years.. to the hardest tears.. to just souvenirs
That glass of champaign was spillin' over / Like our love a shame it wouldn't last
That glass of Korbel was spillin' over Like our love that wasn't meant to last
She's Gonna Wanna Thank You (concept could be that everything he's learned will help his next relationship)
Found that picture from El Paso / you’re in the middle of a laugh
I remember laying with you countin' stars / Like the whole world was spinning right in my arms
That Sunday morning you broke us in a thousand pieces / when I saw your car parked right there in his drive
Both of us should get a trophy / For what we put each other through
Woke up thinking 'bout the day you slammed my door How you turned around threw that ring on the floor
It’s why- don’t wanna miss living a lifetime (with)
Each day- to see you smile like this I'd love it
Each day-- I'd love making you smile for all time
cuz life - could be crazy good to share (with)
cuz life -is the perfect thing to share (with)
Cuz LIFE -- would be crazy good by the side (of)
I could get used to this each night ending with your kiss
Take- this where you wanna go/ Love- that it's unusual
I - wanna know you by heart / This- could be just the start
you're -beyond beautiful you've changed- this guy's lonely soul
Love - never thought I'd find it/ You - led me right to it (or: into it)
You - found my heart just waitin' / open Who --- wouldn't call this fate
I -- thought my heart was dying you -- brought it back to life
Love - never thought I'd find it/ Now - my heart can't hide it
romancing / discovering
romancing/ and uncovering
wrapped up tight/ amazed by
Discovering you/ then sleepin’ next to
Makin’ you smile/ then sleeping a while (with)
Pulling you in/ smilin’ again with
Pillow talkin’ / until dawn with
Love every touch and just takin' it slow/ No need to rush it when we’re striking gold
Tracing your body and we're takin' it slow/ Knowing we got all night and forever I hope
I wanna know you til I know you by heart Let’s start forever right here in my arms
Each time you kiss me Mother Nature reacts/ I swear there's thunder when you touch me like that
Each time we kiss it's like the finest champaign/ The room spins a little you get to me that way
Let’s shut the curtains/ even block out the moon/ I'm lovin' concentratin' only on you
No word invented Baby I swear (Whatcha) pretty is doing to my heart here (next to) someone so rare ( ) means pick up words
There ain't no word/ Webster has shared/ For your kind of beauty /Yeah in my arms here/ you're someone so rare
Your body’s like silk/ floating on air/ I’m wrapped in your love/ baby I swear You’re someone so rare
Your body's like silk/ Floatin' on air/ A heart made of gold/ a treasure I swear /you're someone so rare
I fall each time/you kiss me I swear/- there's gotta be magic in this midnight air/ you're someone so rare
Someone so rare/ wanna know every part/and uncover em slow/ down to your beautiful heart
Someone so rare/ Someone so gorgeous/ With every kiss/ Baby I'm sure of this...
Someone so rare/ Deep in my arms/ Dreams do come true/ Just ask my heart/ That bit of gold in your eyes/ And the way that you're smiling/ Is a treasure worth finding/ and baby I swear.. no one could ever compare/ you're someone so rare
Someone so rare Deep in my arms Dreams do come true Just ask my heart
Someone so rare/ Eyes are like gold/ The way that they're smiling/ Baby I'm sold/ Your hands are like silk/ Your kiss midnight smooth/ I could stay here forever/ My arms deep around you / Now no one will ever compare to someone so rare
you're beautiful / wanna know the soul (of)
(and) everything / I'm discovering (is)
Every kiss / giving me hints (of)
The heat that's between us could melt all those stars / Your touch must be magic right here in my arms. (I liked the internal of touch/must, but it adds a syllable so it could be "touch is" if need be
The heat we got going is meltin' these sheets / Your touch is golden whatcha doing to me
Musta been the wind but I thought it was your whisper

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