Posted May 10, 2019 by JennRiley & filed under .
Congratulations, JennRiley! Great lyric!
Kudos on the winning line, JennRiley. You had lots of good submissions!
Congrats to youJennRiley, Great line.
I am trying!! thank you for the feedback!
first line is the only weak point because it's a left over part of a sentence. make it stand on it's own.