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looking for the light

Posted May 10, 2019 by JennRiley & filed under .
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6 replies on “looking for the light”
Congratulations, JennRiley! Great lyric!

Anonymoussays:

May 11, 2019 at 8:20 pm
Kudos on the winning line, JennRiley. You had lots of good submissions!

Therese (TAM)says:

May 10, 2019 at 8:38 pm
thank you!

JennRileysays:

May 10, 2019 at 7:46 pm
Congrats to youJennRiley, Great line.

PCamsays:

May 10, 2019 at 7:43 pm
I am trying!! thank you for the feedback!

JennRileysays:

May 8, 2019 at 3:26 pm
first line is the only weak point because it's a left over part of a sentence. make it stand on it's own.

Beth Nielsen Chapmansays:

May 8, 2019 at 12:17 pm