PoeticJustice, Author at Hookist
PoeticJustice

PoeticJustice

Username: PoeticJustice

PoeticJustice

Username: PoeticJustice
Tennessee
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jaynesachs commented on PoeticJustice's lyric:

"Hello!!! Nice writing."

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Lyric by PoeticJustice:

"I’ll stay here with you and hold your hand just like you did for me I’d take your place if I could either way The outcomes the same the only thing I’ll be missing is you"

darden smith commented on PoeticJustice's lyric:

"nice, but try to focus it a bit. seems a bit lyrical for the song. just a thought."

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Lyric by PoeticJustice:

"There will come a time when you can make it on your own your memories will sustain you that’s how much you’ve grown"

jaynesachs commented on PoeticJustice's lyric:

"Hello!!! Nice writing."

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Lyric by PoeticJustice:

"I’ll stay here with you and hold your hand just like you did for me I’d take your place if I could either way The outcomes the same the only thing I’ll be missing is you"

jaynesachs commented on PoeticJustice's lyric:

"Ahhh sad story here. I can see why she’d be holding on to her baby’s picture. 💔"

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Lyric by PoeticJustice:

"It’s been so long since I’ve seen life in your eyes I know there’s one thing that can bring back your smile again to be holding our baby instead of that picture again"

jaynesachs commented on PoeticJustice's lyric:

"Hey! Check this against Chris’s melody for a guide. It will help you trim it down to the basics and also allow it to be sung. Ie..
You can’t pretend it isn’t there everyday/
When you’re looking for something but can’t find the words to say "

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Lyric by PoeticJustice:

"It’s not something you can pretend doesn’t matter it’s always there day to day the feeling you should be looking for something but you can’t even find the right words to say."

jaynesachs commented on PoeticJustice's lyric:

"Really nice thoughts. I agree we should not want to forget anything but learn from everything if we can. This would have to be trimmed down a lot
to fit the flow or cadence of the melody. If you listen to the clip at the end of the video you’ll hear the melody that we’re fitting lyrics too. Just try to sing your lyrics to what Chris is doing as a guide. "

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Lyric by PoeticJustice:

"Now that I know the power of a memory I feel bad for trying to forget when someone hurt me or when he wouldn’t stay if you have precious memories hold tight and pray nothing takes them away."

darden smith commented on PoeticJustice's lyric:

"nice, but try to focus it a bit. seems a bit lyrical for the song. just a thought."

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Lyric by PoeticJustice:

"There will come a time when you can make it on your own your memories will sustain you that’s how much you’ve grown"

Song Stats

My Lyrics

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  • Jayne Sachs & Chris Robbins
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I’ll stay here with you and hold your hand just like you did for me I’d take your place if I could either way The outcomes the same the only thing I’ll be missing is you
It’s been so long since I’ve seen life in your eyes Id steal the stars from the sky if I could see you smile again by there’s only one way and it’s outta my hands if only you could be holding our baby instead
It’s been so long since I’ve seen life in your eyes I know there’s one thing that can bring back your smile again to be holding our baby instead of that picture again
It’s not something you can pretend doesn’t matter it’s always there day to day the feeling you should be looking for something but you can’t even find the right words to say.
Now that I know the power of a memory I feel bad for trying to forget when someone hurt me or when he wouldn’t stay if you have precious memories hold tight and pray nothing takes them away.
When did it end I can’t remember I only remember trying to forget
When all we’ve seen is the ugly side of the world To have hope in each other starts a new day take a breathe step up and lead the way.
How did we get to this place where appendages make the rules
The name of the game is control it’s what they have over you and me We can’t go on letting it be
The underground’s a grave for permanent rest Don’t bury America she ain’t done yet
All we want is to make a difference it doesn’t come down to lies or truths just make things better you don’t have to be a sleuth.
Can I wish upon a star and have that wish come true or do even the stars lie to me and you?
Who’s truth do we believe when they all believe their’s is true
There are no fact's in the story its just a cover for the lies how long until those lies become alibis
You can see it in my eyes I don’t go down easy I won’t fall for your lines there just to sleazy.
Pulling them all together one love many heart
Bringing us closer with every spark hearts beat with the same rhythm We recognize each other even in the dark.
Let them know of love they’re worthy that can never be erased
Because all we’ve ever had is hope and trust in each other When we come together as One we always win the fight No doubt no fear One World now clear
There will come a time when you can make it on your own your memories will sustain you that’s how much you’ve grown
When you are strong enough to go forward and you can make it on your own if you feel yourself start to falter my strength you’ll carry with you it will help you through I will carry you
When I am strong enough to go ahead alone and your on your own too if you need strength to get you further call my name and I will carry you

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