Thank you Dan! This is a rhyme scheme I’ve used in several songs where the next couplet would follow the same pattern and end with a rhyme for “disappeared”. I hear it in my head but I know not everyone else does!
Great line. I am having a little trouble singing the has disappeared part since it doesn't rhyme with the other lines. How about:has fallen through a trapdoor.
Thank you so much, MariaJack!❤️
This is beautiful! I came late to the game! <3
Thanks so much, TandFCHowes!
Thanks so much, Keith! Congratulations on your shoutout!
Fantastic Kayly . . . well written!
Congratulations Kayly! Great lines.
Dan Herman, pekkepop & toddtanium in da house!
Thank you, toddtanium!
Thanks again, Meredith!
Thank you Dan! This is a rhyme scheme I’ve used in several songs where the next couplet would follow the same pattern and end with a rhyme for “disappeared”. I hear it in my head but I know not everyone else does!
Great line. I am having a little trouble singing the has disappeared part since it doesn't rhyme with the other lines. How about:has fallen through a trapdoor.
This is a great starting point for our song!
Thanks so much, Meredith!
Oooh, love it!
Thank you, Lovie!
Thank you, Merilee!
Thank you, Blue!
Thank you, Renee!
As do I. Captures the dizzy speed of the dramatic changes we are all experiencing
Beautiful! I agree with both Keith and Terry.
Thank you so much, Terry!
Really great and totally agree with Keith. Fantastic line… "hardly can remember our before".👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Thank you, Dee!
Thank you, pekkepop!
Thank you, Keith!
I like it!
hardly can remember our before, really nice!