All, I would appreciate your input (I value your input). Please feel free to comment and / or make suggestions on my submittals.
Thanks Beth! I'll work on it.
We did a big security update and it upset the apple cart a bit! We are working feverishly to fix it! So sorry for the inconvenience!!!
Ok…trying this again!!! sometimes when I submit there's nothing there!! 🤪😕😩
I love "Tug of war"…but "our hearts are in" is tough to sing in front of that. what else can you put with tug of war that's fresh and fits easily?
the last 2 lines are really close…but "heart" has already had a big spot at the end of the first 2 verses …what's new we can say here…great last line!
This sings very well, nicely done👍
open door…nice!
Good "thought" Merilee.
Love that last line!
Idea: our thoughts are in a tug o war? That eliminates using hearts twice in same verse, and points back to the mind, that we can't change.
Love this lyric! Great imagery! All the words are perfect!
Thanks for the comments everyone!
Last two lines are awesome!
love the imagery of tug-o-war
Oops..this phone key pad soo sensitive…good morning all 😊
Same here, really like the open door line.
I also really like the heart being an open door idea as well!
Thanks all!
Ding, ding, ding! Love it!
Really like the heart is still an open door line.
I like the two last lines..:)
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