Merilee

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  • Beth Nielsen Chapman

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Merilee's lyric:

"Really like this and how it gives me that bit of humor...still not right in how it sings.

below I've put in parenthesis the extra syllables and in the second line you need one more. there's a way to do this!! But I want you to figure it out.

Make it conversational...just like you'd say it. Lots to think about!

well I could show (you) a map
Draw you (-) a picture
Read the facts
Line by line
(but in) stead of that
How about (we have) a real good time

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Lyric by Merilee:

"So I unfold my map"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Merilee's lyric:

"Really like this and how it gives me that bit of humor...still not right in how it sings.

below I've put in parenthesis the extra syllables and in the second line you need one more. there's a way to do this!! But I want you to figure it out.

Make it conversational...just like you'd say it. Lots to think about!

well I could show (you) a map
Draw you (-) a picture
Read the facts
Line by line
(but in) stead of that
How about (we have) a real good time

"

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Lyric by Merilee:

"So I unfold my map"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Merilee's lyric:

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Lyric by Merilee:

"So I unfold my map"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Merilee's lyric:

""

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Lyric by Merilee:

"So I unfold my map"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Merilee's lyric:

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Lyric by Merilee:

"So I unfold my map"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Merilee's lyric:

"Ok that's weird. sometimes I write a whole thing and when I hit submit it disappears! here I go again:

Here's a way you can rework this verse with humor and also have it fit!

I could unfold this map
Draw a little picture
State my facts
Thousands of times (taking my stand)
But I'll look back
(Knowing when the truth unwinds)
I'm never gonna change your mind

this is NOT finished but shows you all the whacky things I try...

the stuff in parenthesis are other options or lines on the way to the final lines maybe...
keep playing with it!"

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Lyric by Merilee:

"So I unfold my map"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Merilee's lyric:

"nice first line!"

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Lyric by Merilee:

"Lookin' for a ray of hope, just a simple glance will do. It's not seein' eye to eye I know, but certainly the start of something new."

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Merilee's lyric:

"not bad! putting it in my side column! "

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Lyric by Merilee:

"Verse 3 re-Work using same phrases: I could state my case, try to win you over, scream and pace, tangled in pride, what a waste, to argue till the end of time."

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Merilee's lyric:

"like the 'tryin' rhyme...but for the third line so you can have ABAB. and 10 or 11 syllables sings best for the second line"

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Lyric by Merilee:

"I was never gonna change your mind, so I gave up, stopped tryin'"

My Lyrics

Written for:

  • Beth Nielsen Chapman
  • Clay Mills
You know I'm not the betting kind / And I'm never gonna change your mind!

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(Keithcurtis) Well you hide your self/ Never mind the reasons/ Feel the felt/ Bet on the line/ (Merilee) Grab the dice/ Throw ‘em for a hopeless ride/(BNC) And I’m never gonna change your mind.
(PatriciaA) So I show my cards / Lay ’em on the table/(Merilee) Time to fold/lay it all down /(keithcurtis)You check your hand / (Merilee) hoping that you're right this time.
(So I show my cards / Lay ’em on the table – PatriciaA)/ Will you fold/ Are you all in (brief, suspenseful pause) / You grab the dice/ And throw em for a HOPELESS ride! I’m never gonna change your mind.
(So I show my cards / Lay ’em on the table - PatriciaA)/ Will you fold/ Are you all in (brief, suspenseful pause) / You grab the dice/ And throw em for another ride! I’m never gonna change your mind.

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So I show my cards / Lay ’em on the table (PatriciaA)/ Will you fold/ Are you all in /Winner takes all /or maybe we'll share the prize! But I'm never gonna change your mind.
I rest my case / Think I won you over/ (But) for Love's sake/ I'll call it a tie/ let's just stop/(and) Save it for another time. 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind.
I rest my case/ Hope I won you over / Either way/ Time to move on/ You and I have better ways to spend our time/ And I'm never gonna change your mind!!
So I rest my case/ Think I won you over/ Either way/ let's call it a day/ we can find/ a better way to spend our time/ And I'm never gonna change your mind!
So I rest my case/ Think I won you over/ Either way/ (It's) time to move on/ You and I/ should spend our time being kind. Cause I'm never gonna change your mind!

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Now I'll rest my case/ Take a little breather/(A) change of pace/(and) we'll be alright.

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So I rest my case/ Take a little breather
In the middle of your heart/Hidden out of sight/There's a little part/Captured by the light/Revealing to the dark/The notion that I might...
In the middle of your heart/ hidden out of sight/ bullseye('s) in the dark/ reason shines a light/ hoping to impart/the notion that I might....
In the middle of your heart/hidden out of sight/ you feel a little spark/ reason shines a light/revealing to the dark/ the notion that I might/ might just/ might be right
So I unfold my map
Lookin' for a ray of hope, just a simple glance will do. It's not seein' eye to eye I know, but certainly the start of something new.
I'm searching for a ray of hope, (And) Watching for the slightest chance, to really let our love light glow, let's forget our disagreements and dance!
You and I are so alike, It took awhile to figure that out. When we share a laugh and smile, we forget what we were fusin' about.
Verse 3 re-Work using same phrases: I could state my case, try to win you over, scream and pace, tangled in pride, what a waste, to argue till the end of time.
You and I are so alike, Surprised we couldn't figure that one out. When you flash that killer smile, I forget what we were talking about.
(Edit) Fire away! Hope I hit the bullseye, what we say, shouldn't tear us apart. I'll follow the high road and swallow my foolish pride, 'cause I'm never gonna change your mind!
Fire away! Going for the bullseye. What we say, shouldn't tear us apart. I'm gonna take the high road and swallow my pride, cause I'm never gonna change your mind.
Well I could show you a map- Draw you a picture- Read the facts, line by line- but what's the point- I'd just be wasting our time, cause I'm never gonna change your mind!
I'm never gonna change your mind, I see the flames burnin'in your eyes.
I was never gonna change your mind, you're the type that holds (onto) a grudge. So I finally gave up, quit tryin', and decided to depend on luck.
You're never gonna change my mind, the last time was the very last time.
I'm never gonna change your mind, but I thought you'd like to know...

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I'm never gonna change your mind, but your heart might listen to reason.

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I'm never gonna change your mind, why beat my head against the wall?

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You're never gonna change my mind, you can't convince me to live a lie.
You're never gonna change my mind, I'd be a fool to believe your lies.

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I'm never gonna change your mind, but your heart will convince you, to try one more time.
You're never gonna change my mind, you know I mean it, we're out of time.
I was never gonna change your mind, so I gave up, stopped tryin'
One kiss and my heart started beating

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Makes you crazy and your heart starts reeling

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Woke me up, gave my life new meaning.

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There ain't one kiss I'd wanna take back girl, you rocked my whole world, there's no regret

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There ain't one kiss I'd take back, girl, You changed my whole world, I can't forget

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There's one kiss I'd take back, girl, when you said the L-word and stole my heart.

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You were telling quite the story about a lover from your past
Turns out it was me

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Now That I know what You Knew (back then)
Washed out Denim Jeans

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Smiling in the Mirror

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Painting the Sky Blue
Far back as I remember we were joined at the hip, our relationship, was one for the books.

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