9 responses to “But we soaked in way more than that West Texas sun / Learnin’ how lovers come, how lover’s come undone”

1. jaynesachs says:

   April 4, 2019 at 6:01 pm

   Thank you Marianne! And thanks Clay. Glad it worked.

2. Marianne Murdock says:

   April 4, 2019 at 4:03 pm

   Congratulations Jayne!

3. Clay Mills says:

   April 4, 2019 at 6:20 am

   Thanks for going back to the original rhyme scheme!

4. Lovie D'Sa says:

   April 3, 2019 at 10:47 pm
5. jaynesachs says:

   April 3, 2019 at 9:59 pm

   tweak: We soaked in way more than Texas sunshine / Learnin’ how lovers come undone

6. jaynesachs says:

   April 3, 2019 at 6:51 pm

   Maybe "We soaked IN way more than Texas sun…etc.." Up is used in the CH.

7. jaynesachs says:

   April 3, 2019 at 6:50 pm

   Thanks Meredith and Kevin!

8. KevinOsborne321 says:

   April 3, 2019 at 8:57 am

   Moving and deeply touching, Jayne.

9. Meredith Collins says:

   April 2, 2019 at 11:25 pm

   Wow. Love it!