But when I'm feeling sure and clear • Hookist
  • But when I’m feeling sure and clear

    Comments are closed.

    16 replies on “But when I’m feeling sure and clear”

    image

    Hi Patricia. I just saw your modifications. I think the problem she was having with it was that “sometimes…” is a mouthful. You might have a listen to the video again, but that was my take. Just two cents.

    image

    I think the comment section would be sufficient, but to be sure, I think I’d say it in a post as well. Being sure is never a bad thing!

    image

    Forgot to tell you to resubmit whatever you decide you like best and note that it is a change that Beth suggested. You may have already done that, but thought I’d say it anyway. Congratulations!

    image

    I like when I see (or when I feel) the truth so clear… the shine word is hard to say right after truth… Thanks so much, I'm submitting some lines now.. 😊👌👍

    image

    Just a few more for ya. Enjoy working the line to your satisfaction!

    “But anytime the truth’s so near”
    “When I find the truth so clear”
    “When I see the truth so clear”

    image

    No problem. I’ll keep thinking about them. Take all the inputs you get and put together what works best for you. Hate to sound cliche, but it’s your truth!

    image

    Thanks, will do..! And please feel free to share your ideas of changes for that line. I've seen a few suggestions already. I appreciate that you offered them though, very considerate of you. 😊👍

    image

    Hi Keith, that's very kind of you. I'm new in the songwriting community and I'm a little confused right now. My lines disappeared. I think Beth might have used only the word "truth". She wrote this line. I wrote "Everytime I follow my truth". Do I get the credit anyway? Just want to make sure it's not a mistake…

    image

    Hi Patricia, Beth suggested that the line may need to be easier to sing. I had some ideas so I thought I’d pass them along. All yours if you want them, pass on them if not. Congratulations on your selection!:

    Ideas for: Sometimes when the truth shines clear “Anytime the truth shines clear” “When I see the truth shine clear” “When I feel the truth this near” “When I see the truth shine clear” “When I know it’s truth this near” “If I see the truth shine clear” Mostly the same idea, just a bit less of a mouth full.

This modal has video

×