"When you wake up in the night in a cold sweat/thinking of things you're trying to forget"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Ralph's lyric:
"oohhhhh....really like "we could argue til the end of time..." great line before the last line!"
(more)"argue til the end of time"
"Lost in all these thoughts of you / Want to make your dreams come true"
"There is no music without You and I"
"When you wake up in the night in a cold sweat/thinking of things you're trying to forget"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Ralph's lyric:
"oohhhhh....really like "we could argue til the end of time..." great line before the last line!"
(more)"argue til the end of time"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Ralph's lyric:
"Love the word "truth"....makes me think since you said "prove" you could rhyme "truth" with "proof" and that would be killer!
I could state my truth
show you all the answers
Think my proof
will open your eyes
"
"I could prove you wrong / show you all the answers / if you can't see the truth / you must be blind / that'll take to long /and I not wasting my time / cause I never gonna change your mind"
"Lost in all these thoughts of you / Want to make your dreams come true"
"Lost, in all these thoughts of you / Found, all these feelings are true"
"Holding on / turning on"
"Caressing you / holding on to"
"This night is moving a little to fast / wish we could do something to make it last"
"The softness of your body lying next to mine / has me wishing I had nothing but time"
"My days are filled, dreaming of nights / taking you in my arms and holding on tight (to someone so rare)"
Marty Dodson commented on Ralph's lyric:
"I like the way you played with the rhyme scheme, Ralph!"
(more)"taking you heart, to hold with mine / I'm always wondering, how did I find (someone so rare)"
"(Someone so rare) Girl you are custom made / exactly (just) what I asked God for when I prayed"
"(Someone so rare), my heads in the clouds / my heart's in your hands, I'm dreaming out loud"
Marty Dodson commented on Ralph's lyric:
"I like this, but I"m not sure it get"s us to the title. I"ll think on it."
(more)"You and me / can't you see"
Marty Dodson commented on Ralph's lyric:
"I love the first line, but the second line gives away the title. When we finally say the title, it won"t be a big moment because we"ve already said that she"s so rare. I"d love to see what you could come up with using this first line and a new idea for the back half that doesn"t give away the title."
(more)"This night has turned into a dream come true / and it is because of the rareness of you"
Marty Dodson commented on Ralph's lyric:
"I like the "gold" idea going with diamond and being something that is rare. I wonder if there"s a better back half of the line? "
(more)"Our bodies melt together like gold in a flame/My feelings for you are not hard to explain"
Marty Dodson commented on Ralph's lyric:
"That"s a killer opening line! Very interesting. I like that it opens up a million possibilities."
(more)"So this is what everyone's been talking about..."
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The Springs Band commented on Ralph's lyric:
"Aw! Love!!!!!"
(more)"There is no music without You and I"