I have been writing for a while now but just now beginning to try to pursue it and see where it might take me. I am looking to learn as much as I can and hopefully make some connections to co-write. Looking forward to writing with the folks here on Hookist.
My Chosen Lyrics
My Most Liked Lyrics
Top 10 most prolific
My Diamond's In The Rough
"Lost in all these thoughts of you / Want to make your dreams come true"
"Lost, in all these thoughts of you / Found, all these feelings are true"
"Holding on / turning on"
"Caressing you / holding on to"
"This night is moving a little to fast / wish we could do something to make it last"
"The softness of your body lying next to mine / has me wishing I had nothing but time"
"My days are filled, dreaming of nights / taking you in my arms and holding on tight (to someone so rare)"
"I like the way you played with the rhyme scheme, Ralph!"(more)
"taking you heart, to hold with mine / I'm always wondering, how did I find (someone so rare)"
"(Someone so rare) Girl you are custom made / exactly (just) what I asked God for when I prayed"
"(Someone so rare), my heads in the clouds / my heart's in your hands, I'm dreaming out loud"
"I like this, but I"m not sure it get"s us to the title. I"ll think on it."(more)
"You and me / can't you see"
"I love the first line, but the second line gives away the title. When we finally say the title, it won"t be a big moment because we"ve already said that she"s so rare. I"d love to see what you could come up with using this first line and a new idea for the back half that doesn"t give away the title."(more)
"This night has turned into a dream come true / and it is because of the rareness of you"
"I like the "gold" idea going with diamond and being something that is rare. I wonder if there"s a better back half of the line? "(more)
"Our bodies melt together like gold in a flame/My feelings for you are not hard to explain"