I’m voting for Dan Herman’s suggestion of using the first part of Pauls line as a/the Pre Chorus and Kathryn’s line as a/the Chorus – not because this respects both lines – but because they sound great that way
We’ve got a tie!
I like the idea too! And Paul, you crack me up!
I would agree with your thought about the pre-chorus being about urgency and the chorus being about what the better way is. You should resubmit your Gotta Step Up line from the previous round. You could be the peanut butter to my jelly or the cream to my Oreo.
I was thinking it would be interesting to split these up – make 2 pre-choruses I guess? Then the 1st chorsu could be about urgency and need to find a better way and then what the better way is? No idea if that is proper song structure, but it’s making sense to me right now!
Hmm…I better go find that!
cool paul – really good!
Nice Paul!
I like G.T.’s suggestion from the previous round to have Sassafrass’ Gotta Step Up line from previous round go with mine. I think it would work well in between my 2 lines here.
Resubmitting my line from previous round with an additional line to go with it.
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