Posted March 3, 2017 by Paul Goerke & filed under .
Thanks G.T.! Yes, I was trying to follow the story of the song and kinda had a feeling I was getting a little lucky when I saw I had the words “heavy” and “stronger”.
Paul, what a great followup line to your previous selection!! I love the thought of gaining strength by carrying the burden. Beautiful!
Thanks Walker, Meredith, Dan & Terry. I think become was the word that came to me first rather than — we grow — or — we get — because it sounds like the word beacon (light) and I thought that sounded cool. I like the word — grow — also. It fits the story of the song and if it fits the melody better I’m for it.
WOW! Awesome lines Paul!!
Great line. The second line may fit the melody better with one fewer syllable. The stronger we grow/the higher we fly
whoa! Paul! You are on fire! LUV!
Love the combo!