• Still I try, try, try

    5 responses to “Still I try, try, try”

    1. Beth Nielsen Chapman says:

      VERY hooky!! try try try!!

      "cause I ain't no" is hard to sing easily with the melody…why not:

      "I’m gonna try, try, try
      I am not not a quitter
      why why why_____"

      keep going!!!

    2. nonnairene says:

      Hello Hookman. I really like it ..before I saw the comments. Would it still work if you kept it as it is…but instead of the word "gonna"…use "could"
      But having said that…its more passionate the way you wrote it Hookman…I tend to overthink things …

    3. hookman says:

      would you like to help? i had second thoughts because try,try,try is saying i'm gonna keep trying to change your mind.. what do u think?

    4. hookman says:

      would you like to help? i had second thoughts because try,try,try is saying i'm gonna keep trying to change your mind.. what do u think?

    5. Terry Derkach says:

      This is a REALLY great line to build from or to! Nice one hookman!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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