Still I try, try, try • Hookist

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    VERY hooky!! try try try!!

    "cause I ain't no" is hard to sing easily with the melody…why not:

    "I’m gonna try, try, try
    I am not not a quitter
    why why why_____"

    keep going!!!

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    Hello Hookman. I really like it ..before I saw the comments. Would it still work if you kept it as it is…but instead of the word "gonna"…use "could"
    But having said that…its more passionate the way you wrote it Hookman…I tend to overthink things …

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    would you like to help? i had second thoughts because try,try,try is saying i'm gonna keep trying to change your mind.. what do u think?

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    would you like to help? i had second thoughts because try,try,try is saying i'm gonna keep trying to change your mind.. what do u think?

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