Posted April 23, 2019 by hookman & filed under .
VERY hooky!! try try try!!
"cause I ain't no" is hard to sing easily with the melody…why not:
"I’m gonna try, try, try I am not not a quitterwhy why why_____"
Hello Hookman. I really like it ..before I saw the comments. Would it still work if you kept it as it is…but instead of the word "gonna"…use "could"But having said that…its more passionate the way you wrote it Hookman…I tend to overthink things …
would you like to help? i had second thoughts because try,try,try is saying i'm gonna keep trying to change your mind.. what do u think?
This is a REALLY great line to build from or to! Nice one hookman!👏👏👏