hookman

Username: hookman

Band: Brian Smalt

From: corning new york

About Me

I'm one of those people that always has a melody on my mind.. always fishin for a good hook!

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  • Beth Nielsen Chapman

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on hookman's lyric:

"VERY hooky!! try try try!!

"cause I ain't no" is hard to sing easily with the melody...why not:

"I’m gonna try, try, try
I am not not a quitter
why why why_____"


keep going!!!"

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Lyric by hookman:

"Still I try, try, try"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on hookman's lyric:

"VERY hooky!! try try try!!

"cause I ain't no" is hard to sing easily with the melody...why not:

"I’m gonna try, try, try
I am not not a quitter
why why why_____"


keep going!!!"

(more)
Lyric by hookman:

"Still I try, try, try"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on hookman's lyric:

"Ha! very imaginative! But you've lost the rhyme plot! Great rhymes though...but you gotta follow the melody and rhyme scheme laid out!

First 2 lines are great! "

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Lyric by hookman:

"Well..I'm gonna try,try,try I'm not not a guitter. Why, why, why, won't you reconsider..gonna work, work, work till I get a blister..cause being stubborn ain't a crime.."

My Lyrics

Written for:

  • Marti Dodson
  • Beth Nielsen Chapman
  • Clay Mills
The past is not behind me..the memories will always be with me..every morning is a new day dawning...
Not gonna play it safe..not gonna wait...the days are numbered... and undiscovered... this is my wish

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I've burned a few and I've learned a few..and the scars i've earned... so don't waste time chasing a dime because... life is short...

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Don't waste time watching the clock... it keeps goin tick tock tick tock..life is short...

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Unknown territory can be scary... still you stayed with me..

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But I try, try, try

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So I'm gonna keep the faith and hurry up and wait...
So..I'm gonna finish what I started..

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Still I try, try, try
Well..I'm gonna try,try,try I'm not not a guitter. Why, why, why, won't you reconsider..gonna work, work, work till I get a blister..cause being stubborn ain't a crime..
Well.. I'm gonna try, try, try cause I ain't no quitter... cry,cry,cry being stubborn ain't a crime... try, try,try till I get a blister
Even if I was the keeper of time..i can't change how you feel inside..

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Your never gonna change my mind..lets turn the page and not collide..

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But I guess that ain't a crime..that's your choice not mine..
Healing is gonna take some time... there ain't no reason or rhyme..

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Change takes an open mind... if you seek you will find..

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There's nothing I'd erase..there's no mistakes girl.
They say...Can't move forward if you hold on to the past
I confess I made a mess...I confess..

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