The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph's red NOSE has grown DIM • Hookist

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The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph’s red NOSE has grown DIM

Posted December 11, 2015 by Ray J. Lonsdale & filed under .
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5 replies on “The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph’s red NOSE has grown DIM”
Well done Ray! 🙂

Daniel Evanssays:

December 12, 2015 at 4:15 am
just a little different in the second line, tweaking the meter

Brad Robertssays:

December 11, 2015 at 3:01 pm
The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph’s red NOSE has grown DIM

Brad Robertssays:

December 11, 2015 at 3:00 pm
yeah, that is good!

Meredith Collinssays:

December 11, 2015 at 1:35 pm
Cool rhyme!

Pekkepopsays:

December 11, 2015 at 12:45 pm