5 responses to “The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph’s red NOSE has grown DIM”

1. Daniel Evans says:

   December 12, 2015 at 4:15 am

   Well done Ray! 🙂

2. Brad Roberts says:

   December 11, 2015 at 3:01 pm

   just a little different in the second line, tweaking the meter

3. Brad Roberts says:

   December 11, 2015 at 3:00 pm

   The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph’s red NOSE has grown DIM

4. Meredith Collins says:

   December 11, 2015 at 1:35 pm

   yeah, that is good!

5. Pekkepop says:

   December 11, 2015 at 12:45 pm

   Cool rhyme!