The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph’s red NOSE has grown DIM

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The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph’s red NOSE has grown DIM

Posted December 11, 2015 by Ray J. Lonsdale & filed under .
5 responses to “The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph’s red NOSE has grown DIM”
1. Daniel Evans says:
  
  December 12, 2015 at 4:15 am
  
  Well done Ray! 🙂
2. Brad Roberts says:
  
  December 11, 2015 at 3:01 pm
  
  just a little different in the second line, tweaking the meter
3. Brad Roberts says:
  
  December 11, 2015 at 3:00 pm
  
  The ELVES they all FEAR him and BOW to his WHIM; and EV-en poor RU-dolph’s red NOSE has grown DIM
4. Meredith Collins says:
  
  December 11, 2015 at 1:35 pm
  
  yeah, that is good!
5. Pekkepop says:
  
  December 11, 2015 at 12:45 pm
  
  Cool rhyme!