Posted April 18, 2016 by G.T.Edwards & filed under .
Thanks for the comments and support everyone. I agree with Dan and Meredith, hope would be an excellent word to substitute for the word love. In fact I like that batter.
The internal rhyme of truth and proof is excellent.
Fantastic – You win!!
beautiful! I like the idea of hope to for the specific case of this song.
Great line. I Like the word untainted. Could consider substituting love with hope.
Thank you my friends!
You’re really good!