Shefik

Username: Shefik

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  • Marty Dodson
  • Jack Tempchin
  • Chris Barron
  • Grace McLean
  • sylviatosun
  • sashadobson
  • Brad Roberts

Marty Dodson commented on Shefik's lyric:

"I like the realness and honesty in this. It sound like something you"d really say."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"Sometimes I feel that I don’t deserve all that you do. Sometimes I wonder if I’m good enough for you."

Jack Tempchin commented on Shefik's lyric:

"How to start forgiving, interesting idea"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"This time, I’ll abstain from demanding a cure from the pain."

Chris Barron commented on Shefik's lyric:

"don't die. we'd miss you."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I’m sparing all this time, even though I’ve died."

Grace McLean commented on Shefik's lyric:

"We gotta dogear this lyric..."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"- Would you be horrified by tickles, if they transmogrified us as pickles?"

sylviatosun commented on Shefik's lyric:

"i like the idea of a "frameless canvas""

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Lyric by Shefik:

"The canvas is not framed. Destiny is not tamed. Every stroke of hope bleeds beyond the confines of lines. My soul is not blamed, not shamed, not maimed."

sashadobson commented on Shefik's lyric:

"now you're talking, babe. This is sharp, to the point and also easy to sing. "

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Lyric by Shefik:

"My heart rips through the maze of your fingertips."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"great sentiment. rings very true."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"There is a need to take this time to bleed. Words are wounds that define will to succeed."

Marty Dodson commented on Shefik's lyric:

"I like the realness and honesty in this. It sound like something you"d really say."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"Sometimes I feel that I don’t deserve all that you do. Sometimes I wonder if I’m good enough for you."

Marty Dodson commented on Shefik's lyric:

"Cool way to say "forever"!"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"Here we are, standing on the threshold of time."

Jack Tempchin commented on Shefik's lyric:

"How to start forgiving, interesting idea"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"This time, I’ll abstain from demanding a cure from the pain."

Chris Barron commented on Shefik's lyric:

"don't die. we'd miss you."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I’m sparing all this time, even though I’ve died."

Chris Barron commented on Shefik's lyric:

"whoa. very nice."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I comprehend something less than nothing when I pretend. Must I contend that a shadow puppet is my only friend?"

Chris Barron commented on Shefik's lyric:

"nice."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I’m not anchored by a jealous tea bag, ‘cause coffee grounds the cusp of my swag."

Chris Barron commented on Shefik's lyric:

"dancing in the shade. nice."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I’ve never danced in the shade. I’ve always lived my life in parade."

Chris Barron commented on Shefik's lyric:

"i see what you did there..."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I'm not a doctor, but I play one on TV. If you ask for my opinion, I'll prescribe my latest MP3."

Chris Barron commented on Shefik's lyric:

"wait. i love this. how about: "woke up this morning and hit my head/i'm running out of silver now my goldfish is dead" [?]"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"- I woke up this morning and hit the snooze button in my head. I'm feeling kind of lonely, now that my goldfish is dead."

Grace McLean commented on Shefik's lyric:

"We gotta dogear this lyric..."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"- Would you be horrified by tickles, if they transmogrified us as pickles?"

sylviatosun commented on Shefik's lyric:

"i like the idea of a "frameless canvas""

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Lyric by Shefik:

"The canvas is not framed. Destiny is not tamed. Every stroke of hope bleeds beyond the confines of lines. My soul is not blamed, not shamed, not maimed."

sashadobson commented on Shefik's lyric:

"now you're talking, babe. This is sharp, to the point and also easy to sing. "

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Lyric by Shefik:

"My heart rips through the maze of your fingertips."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"great sentiment. rings very true."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"There is a need to take this time to bleed. Words are wounds that define will to succeed."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"very unusual... really good too"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I resent the fact that I must repent for every last murmur of sentiment."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"this is great bro!"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I'm finding it rather uncanny that I'm framing picturesque insanity."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"your lines get better evey time on this session!"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I snicker at the flicker of memorable days. Flashes go by - will I ever change my ways?"

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"this is the first instance of you rhyming at the END of each line. great! now trim down the number of words. 'this war's a show that critics say will bomb' "

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Lyric by Shefik:

"War is upon us, and critics predict this show to bomb. I don't read all reviews, 'cause I need to stay focused and calm."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"shefik - is this a reference to an extant song?"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I sang this same song, treble without bass. Leader of the band, who I won't dare to replace."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"this is more internal rhyme/than i have seen in quite some time!"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I'm drenched in the stench of wretched wench, without a clue how to woo or even subdue."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"depends what culture you come from, i reckon."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"Why are Sundays included in the weekend, when it's the start of the week?"

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"is this about knocking up some broad? :) "

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Lyric by Shefik:

"The moment I dared to care less and flake, in just one blink - "payback" - for the child I forsake."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"or have you been smoking weed?"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"The moment I dared to care less and flake, in just one blink - "payback" - for the child I forsake."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"i think perhaps that you are simply Shefik, which I looked up - it means He of Plaited Hair and Generous Mind - did you know that, bro?"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"The moment I dared to care less and flake, in just one blink - "payback" - for the child I forsake."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

""I'm trying to cope with the twist of kaleidoscope. Every turn is another moment to relearn." Shefik Shefik, may man! Winner of the previous song title! Good to hear from you. I love your image of a kaleidoscope. I should point out though that you your rhyme scheme is more internal than anything. You rhyme within the line, as opposed to the end of it. I'm trying to cope With the twist of kaleidoscope. Every turn Is another moment to relearn. Like I say though, this notwithstanding, I love the kaleidoscope. Don't give up on it. And by the way, the word "kaleidoscopic" is 2 feet of iambs! - check it out: v / v / v kaleidoscopic Later bro."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I'm trying to cope with the twist of kaleidoscope. Every turn is another moment to relearn."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"cheater, rhyming myself with myself! love, brad"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I saw myself as a need to know myself. Becoming me, I drowned in a sea to flow myself."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"you rhymed palettes with palettes, wonder-boy! :0 "

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Lyric by Shefik:

"As we relish the taste of hope on our palates, we paint pictures of prosperity with our palettes."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"nice biblical reference. works well in the context of the song, which is largely historical ."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"I wondered if these skies would some day be where we embarked. A tired out humanity in a modern Noah's ark."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"you are a morbid motherfucker - like me... good one shefik"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"Some of us are dead, some are living fodder. All are bred from seed dumps - call them our fathers."

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"is this i hint? :)"

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Lyric by Shefik:

"Will my hook ever be chosen, or will my words be left frozen?"

Brad Roberts commented on Shefik's lyric:

"you have quite a way with words - is english your first language? you have a nice, almost 'translated' quality to your writing."

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Lyric by Shefik:

"For every nation in strife, there is a satellite of plight. As this sole space station echoes the soul of creation, let it speak the meaning of life."

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