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Kudos!
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- Marty Dodson
- kalseyk
- Jack Tempchin
- Chris Barron
"Taste of your lips and, that look in your eye / Turns me on to this natural high"
"Make a wish, start to fly, all she wants her life to be is still inside/
Time to soar, set her free, show the world who she can be today."
Jack Tempchin commented on nhpaulao's lyric:
"I like" my fingers tap the wheel/ the storms roll in, and in my head, I tell you how I feel "
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"As hours pass the skies turn dark, my fingers tap the wheel/ the storms roll in, and in my head, I tell you how I feel"
Chris Barron commented on nhpaulao's lyric:
"how about: "five am, coffee's poured/live till i'm dead, die when i'm bored"[?]"
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"Alarm goes off at 5 a.m. the coffee’s being poured / I want to live before I’m dead and don’t want to be bored"
"Taste of your lips and, that look in your eye / Turns me on to this natural high"
"Your silhouette softens in the dimly lit room/ I hear you breathing/ I feel you move"
"You make me believe /
In my hopes and dreams"
"Oh you are / heavenly"
Marty Dodson commented on nhpaulao's lyric:
"This is interesting! A different angle than I was thinking."
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"you're unreal / how's it feel"
"Your body’s so hot as it melts into mine"
"You've got such style, you're sexy and bold / When you look at me girl, I lose all control"
Marty Dodson commented on nhpaulao's lyric:
"This is great. I like the way you hinted at the title, but didn"t completely give it away"
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"Ain't no mistakin' you're one of a kind / That look in your eyes says you want to be mine"
"I was running Cannon Beach, when I saw your tattoo / Two little hearts, one broken and one blue"
Marty Dodson commented on nhpaulao's lyric:
"I would love for the song to be first person. This might work if you changed it to "I"ve set two places at the table", etc. Good work!"
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"She sets two places at the table
Pours the wine and water
Tonight’s our ten-year celebration
Friends can watch our daughter"
"Make a wish, start to fly, all she wants her life to be is still inside/
Time to soar, set her free, show the world who she can be today."
"Guitar in hand she starts to play, her dreams ain’t gonna get away"
Jack Tempchin commented on nhpaulao's lyric:
"I like" my fingers tap the wheel/ the storms roll in, and in my head, I tell you how I feel "
(more)
"As hours pass the skies turn dark, my fingers tap the wheel/ the storms roll in, and in my head, I tell you how I feel"
Chris Barron commented on nhpaulao's lyric:
"how about: "five am, coffee's poured/live till i'm dead, die when i'm bored"[?]"
(more)
"Alarm goes off at 5 a.m. the coffee’s being poured / I want to live before I’m dead and don’t want to be bored"
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Marty Dodson commented on nhpaulao's lyric:
"I like this, Paula!
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