I can see the truth in my children's eyes/ The untainted proof that Hope survives • Hookist

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I can see the truth in my children’s eyes/ The untainted proof that Hope survives

Posted April 18, 2016 by G.T.Edwards & filed under .
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10 replies on “I can see the truth in my children’s eyes/ The untainted proof that Hope survives”
Thanks for the comments and support everyone. I agree with Dan and Meredith, hope would be an excellent word to substitute for the word love. In fact I like that batter.

G.T.Edwardssays:

April 18, 2016 at 2:19 pm
The internal rhyme of truth and proof is excellent.

Dan Hermansays:

April 18, 2016 at 12:01 pm
Fantastic – You win!!

Wally Peterssays:

April 18, 2016 at 10:52 am
Super GT!

Pekkepopsays:

April 18, 2016 at 10:50 am
beautiful! I like the idea of hope to for the specific case of this song.

Meredith Collinssays:

April 18, 2016 at 9:33 am
Great line. I Like the word untainted. Could consider substituting love with hope.

Dan Hermansays:

April 18, 2016 at 8:37 am
Thank you my friends!

G.T.Edwardssays:

April 17, 2016 at 11:22 pm
awesome bro!

Walker Todd Davissays:

April 17, 2016 at 9:13 pm
Great sentiment

JMCsays:

April 17, 2016 at 8:32 pm
You’re really good!

tychesays:

April 17, 2016 at 7:24 pm