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**FRIENDLY REMINDER** Hookist is a COLLABORATION. 99% of the lyrics chosen at Hookist are one line or a couplet. They also get the most comments and votes. If we write ONE really GREAT line at a time, we will have a truly great COLLABORATION. Please watch Gary's video - he is looking for beautiful, poetic ideas that flow off the tongue. Clear, concise ideas with fewer syllables are usually the most powerful and are definitely easier to sing. Hope that helps! :)

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