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I appreciate Saturday's enthusiasm regarding my suggestion and the application of Dan's contraction. Not to beat a live chorus, but since there will be more repetitions of it, perhaps an extra sense of gradual movement and variation can be also be achieved by saving the chosen "We're / We'll" version for AFTER the surley epiphanous bridge - and placing an additional version using "CAN" BEFORE the bridge - "WE CAN find a better way/ The dawning of a new world starting today (kathryn simova) / WE CAN build bridges, knock down walls / Love and peace for one and all (rsmithline)"

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