You wish you could keep dreaming; life is better off that way, / but inside you're screaming; you just want to fly away. • Hookist

Thanks so much!

EliseCYsays:
June 2, 2016 at 2:24 am

that’s really great and love how it continues the story in exactly the way Eric asked. LUV.

You wish you could keep dreaming; life is better off that way, / but inside your head you

EliseCYsays:
June 2, 2016 at 12:04 am

Thanks, Meredith! Here’s my updated line:

EliseCYsays:
June 2, 2016 at 12:03 am

Yes! Love it, Kiki! Just enter it here in the comments. We’re still adding features and the edit button is one of them ;~)

Meredith Collinssays:
June 1, 2016 at 6:04 pm

I meant how do I change it on the site? I know what I’m wanting to change the line to. The website just won’t let me change it, so I was wondering if you knew how I could go in and change things.

EliseCYsays:
June 1, 2016 at 2:51 pm

You could say:but deep inside you’re screaming. Or but inside you are screaming. But that would make four you’s for the couplet which may be too many.

Dan Hermansays:
June 1, 2016 at 2:42 pm

I thought that too. Do you know how I can edit it?

EliseCYsays:
June 1, 2016 at 2:18 pm

Thanks!

EliseCYsays:
June 1, 2016 at 2:18 pm

Great line kiki. This fits very well with the first line. You could consider adding another syllable to the first part of the second line to make it flow better.

Dan Hermansays:
June 1, 2016 at 1:57 pm

You wish you could keep dreaming; life is better off that way, / but inside you’re screaming; you just want to fly away.

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You wish you could keep dreaming; life is better off that way, / but inside you’re screaming; you just want to fly away.

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