Thanks so much!
that’s really great and love how it continues the story in exactly the way Eric asked. LUV.
You wish you could keep dreaming; life is better off that way, / but inside your head you
Thanks, Meredith! Here’s my updated line:
Yes! Love it, Kiki! Just enter it here in the comments. We’re still adding features and the edit button is one of them ;~)
I meant how do I change it on the site? I know what I’m wanting to change the line to. The website just won’t let me change it, so I was wondering if you knew how I could go in and change things.
You could say:but deep inside you’re screaming. Or but inside you are screaming. But that would make four you’s for the couplet which may be too many.
I thought that too. Do you know how I can edit it?
Thanks!
Great line kiki. This fits very well with the first line. You could consider adding another syllable to the first part of the second line to make it flow better.
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