Chris Barron commented on nuvocoke's lyric:
"inside rhyme. i like those. how can we show *desire* and *denial*? can desire be an empty belly and denial be a brick wall, for example?"
(more)"Mulling it over, on a nail bed of clover / desire creeps, denial reaps instead..."
"or a lie, cry, deny, why, goodbye, gotta fly/boots ahead, full backpack, empty heart, no lookin' back"
"paying reason with rhyme, head on collision overdue"
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Chris Barron commented on nuvocoke's lyric:
"inside rhyme. i like those. how can we show *desire* and *denial*? can desire be an empty belly and denial be a brick wall, for example?"
(more)"Mulling it over, on a nail bed of clover / desire creeps, denial reaps instead..."