ImpossibleKings commented on Nor.that's lyric:
"Absolutely beautiful! We're looking for really only the 1st line or couplet to start this next chorus so others can join in on it's writing. That said this is really really good, a beautiful passage and would hate to break it up. Let's see what else comes in!ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»"
(more)"Breathe in, breathe out, and your voice becomes song / I haven't heard you laugh like that in so long. // You give me music and I'll give you safety / your peace of mind has been overdue lately, so.. // Wind down and, lift me up."
ImpossibleKings commented on Nor.that's lyric:
"Yep! Really good Megan. This could be a great way to rise into the chorus!ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»"
(more)"Don't be afraid of how it may sound // It's been a while but everything will quickly turn around"
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ImpossibleKings commented on Nor.that's lyric:
"Absolutely beautiful! We're looking for really only the 1st line or couplet to start this next chorus so others can join in on it's writing. That said this is really really good, a beautiful passage and would hate to break it up. Let's see what else comes in!ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»"
(more)"Breathe in, breathe out, and your voice becomes song / I haven't heard you laugh like that in so long. // You give me music and I'll give you safety / your peace of mind has been overdue lately, so.. // Wind down and, lift me up."