melissa_wordsbyme

Username: melissa_wordsbyme

From: Western Australia

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  • Marty Dodson

Marty Dodson commented on melissa_wordsbyme's lyric:

"You have some good ideas here. The ending feels a little awkward and not conversational. And, we"ve already talked about the light shining, so maybe we don"t need more glimmer. I like where you are going with these lines, though."

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Lyric by melissa_wordsbyme:

"When I pull you closer girl, you glimmer on me/you have my heart, you have my soul, forever we could be"

Marty Dodson commented on melissa_wordsbyme's lyric:

"You have some good ideas here. The ending feels a little awkward and not conversational. And, we"ve already talked about the light shining, so maybe we don"t need more glimmer. I like where you are going with these lines, though."

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Lyric by melissa_wordsbyme:

"When I pull you closer girl, you glimmer on me/you have my heart, you have my soul, forever we could be"

Marty Dodson commented on melissa_wordsbyme's lyric:

"This is a very cool opening line!"

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Lyric by melissa_wordsbyme:

"I go to sleep at night covered in perfume/and a little hint of lipstick incase i dream of you"

My Lyrics

Written for:

  • Marty Dodson
spending forever in this bliss
holding you forever in this bliss......

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Someone so rare/ it’s like striking gold/ being with you/until we grow old
'the way you hold my and you look at me......'
the way you hold my hand and love me............
dance around with me with girl, underneath the night sky/let’s show the moon and stars, we are the perfect rhyme
When I pull you closer girl, you glimmer on me/you have my heart, you have my soul, forever we could be
when i pull you closer girl you glisten on me/there is no place in the world i would rather be
I go to sleep at night covered in perfume/and a little hint of lipstick incase i dream of you
I held my breath from across the room/ you returned my stare as if you knew

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