melissa_wordsbyme

Username: melissa_wordsbyme

From: Western Australia

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  • Marty Dodson

Marty Dodson commented on melissa_wordsbyme's lyric:

"You have some good ideas here. The ending feels a little awkward and not conversational. And, we"ve already talked about the light shining, so maybe we don"t need more glimmer. I like where you are going with these lines, though."

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Lyric by melissa_wordsbyme:

"When I pull you closer girl, you glimmer on me/you have my heart, you have my soul, forever we could be"

Marty Dodson commented on melissa_wordsbyme's lyric:

"You have some good ideas here. The ending feels a little awkward and not conversational. And, we"ve already talked about the light shining, so maybe we don"t need more glimmer. I like where you are going with these lines, though."

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Lyric by melissa_wordsbyme:

"When I pull you closer girl, you glimmer on me/you have my heart, you have my soul, forever we could be"

Marty Dodson commented on melissa_wordsbyme's lyric:

"This is a very cool opening line!"

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Lyric by melissa_wordsbyme:

"I go to sleep at night covered in perfume/and a little hint of lipstick incase i dream of you"

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