"I could be halfway home / who's to know? / I could be closer to the truth than that"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Lincoln's lyric:
"I like "state my case" too ...but we've used that "a" rhyme scheme heavily in the previou B section...need fresh rhymes on the lines that don't have to rhyme with "I"!"
(more)"I'll state my case (BNC) , loaded with conviction/ all my days, tellin' no lies/ words like bait, tempt you to the other side/ But I'm never gonna change your mind."
"Yeah and I'm .... Thinkin' of the night by the ocean / we made ourselves a fire it was smokin'"
"I could be halfway home / who's to know? / I could be closer to the truth than that"
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Lincoln's lyric:
"I like "state my case" too ...but we've used that "a" rhyme scheme heavily in the previou B section...need fresh rhymes on the lines that don't have to rhyme with "I"!"
(more)"I'll state my case (BNC) , loaded with conviction/ all my days, tellin' no lies/ words like bait, tempt you to the other side/ But I'm never gonna change your mind."
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Lincoln's lyric:
"like the first line...but inside what?? don't give me 1/2 a story?
LOVE LOVE the last line. but what is "it" ?? set that up right and it's a great payoff!!"
"I'm looking for a way inside, I'm searching' for the love you never gave/ and though I get no easy ride, I wouldn't have it any other way."
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Lincoln's lyric:
"Long way down deeper than the ocean...that's good!"
(more)"Well it's a long way down, deeper than the ocean/Battleground , smouldering fire / There I've found all I'm ever gonna find /I'm never gonna change your mind..."
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Lincoln's lyric:
"yes...so true Lincoln...anytime I sing a new song at the Bluebird I know AS I SING it if anything is wrong....it's crazy!"
(more)"Well it's a long way down, deeper than the ocean/Battleground , smouldering fire / There I've found all I'm ever gonna find /I'm never gonna change your mind..."
Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Lincoln's lyric:
"ooohhh..."I'm always by your side" is too many syllables...but got me to thinking:
"My heart's on your side"
THAT is a juicy line!"
"Well I could show the way , set a good example/ Come what may , I'm always by your side/ As you came , you're going with your feelings but it's fIne I'm Never gonna change your mind .."
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The Springs Band commented on Lincoln's lyric:
"Nice Lincoln!"
(more)"Yeah and I'm .... Thinkin' of the night by the ocean / we made ourselves a fire it was smokin'"