Ellen Reid commented on William's lyric:
"But pretty. And last word needs to rhyme with skin, remember?"
(more)"As I close my eyes for the very first time, just in time to see / The shadow of your falling star, falling over me"
Ellen Reid commented on William's lyric:
"Well that image of the falling star is lovely. Keep it and see if you can make it work somewhere else."
(more)"As I close my eyes for the very first time, just in time to see / The shadow of your falling star, falling over me"
"Push me farther, further within / today's last sun rays fade from my skin."
"Did you fall into me / or simply trip on ecstasy "
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Ellen Reid commented on William's lyric:
"But pretty. And last word needs to rhyme with skin, remember?"
(more)"As I close my eyes for the very first time, just in time to see / The shadow of your falling star, falling over me"