"He mumbles and scratches out lists on the trees / And draws golden angels in the snow with his pee"
"He mumbles and scratches out lists on the trees / And draws golden angels in the snow with his pee"
Brad Roberts commented on Matt4_4's lyric:
"How about: "He mumbles and scratches out lists on the trees; and draws golden angels in snow with he pee" This rewrite has better flow; do you think it works as well Matt?"
(more)"He mumbles and scratches out lists on the trees / And draws golden angels in the snow with his pee"
Brad Roberts commented on Matt4_4's lyric:
"How about: "He mumbles and scratches out lists on the trees; and draws golden angels in snow with he pee" This rewrite has better flow; do you think it works as well Matt?"
(more)"He mumbles and scratches out lists on the trees / And draws golden angels in the snow with his pee"
"He mumbles and scratches out lists on the trees / And draws golden angels in the snow with his pee"
"Then one evening while jigging for iced fish / Kris gazed at a star and made his OWN wish!"
"Often seen mumbling and scratching at lists / Drawing gold angels when taking a piss"
Brad Roberts commented on Matt4_4's lyric:
"this is my fave of yours, that and the one below rhyming girthy with mirthy!"
(more)"If the hairs on your neck feel a tingle / It's probably that creeper Kris Kringle."
Brad Roberts commented on Matt4_4's lyric:
"girthy and mirthy--love the humor in this ridiculously forced rhyme."
(more)"His belt and belly may be girthy / Inside he's a whole lot less mirthy."
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Brad Roberts commented on Matt4_4's lyric:
"i think this is just great, matt"
(more)"He mumbles and scratches out lists on the trees / And draws golden angels in the snow with his pee"