A Note from Brad 12/29/15
HOOKIST – SANTA’S UNTOLD STORY
We have 5 WINNERS, in order of their appearance in the lyric:
“Buckle up”, said Bunny, “this is not like a sleigh”
“Warping wormholes is rough and not a child’s play”
He buckled his seatbelt and held on tight
And closed his eyes while the drone took flight
Up they flew in a whirl of starlight and snow
And for the first time in years Santa laughed: “Ho-ho-ho!”
Qortni with a Q
With speeds to reach galaxies far, far away
That humbled the specs of his antique sleigh
Like ole’ Scrooge he did sail, round broad span of his life
Cross the myriad shadows and the twinkling lights
Now that Santa and the bunny are on the move, we need them to go somewhere, and to see what they see: put simply, the lines we got today are connective tissue, but presently we need to do some solid story telling here:
Where does the bunny take Santa?
And to what end?
How does the bunny deal with Santa’s problem?
Dive in! Feel free to submit more than one couplet in order to say what has to be said.