But now our odds grow slim, the planet torn asunder. Our science so advanced, we flirt with cosmic blunder. • Hookist

Songs In Progress:

1st Nations Star Nathaniel Arcand

Songs In Progress

But now our odds grow slim, the planet torn asunder. Our science so advanced, we flirt with cosmic blunder.

Posted July 16, 2014 by Brad Roberts & filed under .
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8 replies on “But now our odds grow slim, the planet torn asunder. Our science so advanced, we flirt with cosmic blunder.”
I like it as well as the entire lyric up to day 11 but “planet” keeps not resonating with me – may i suggest in place of “the planet” one of these using “our instead of “the” – harmony chorus amity society species race dynasty tribe empire commonwealth

M. Ochosays:

July 18, 2014 at 12:07 pm
Thanks for the kudos on my previous lyric.

Anna-Marie Smithsays:

July 17, 2014 at 8:04 am
i agree, i desperately needed some direction. great lyric, you’re pretty good at this stuff, you know?

Walker Todd Davissays:

July 17, 2014 at 7:19 am
*focused – (oops, haha)

Anonymoussays:

July 17, 2014 at 12:28 am
Anonymoussays:

July 17, 2014 at 12:28 am
Anonymoussays:

July 17, 2014 at 12:28 am
I see it, too, Brad. I think we’ve all been a bit more focised on our own emotions, rather than thinking in the third “person” sense, as it were, when assesing this scene…myself, included. LOL!! Liked>>>

Anonymoussays:

July 17, 2014 at 12:28 am
Thanks for the shout out and the historic mention. I’m also in Dash and the Dots now for your information! But seriously I’m now seeing more of your lyrical direction.

M. Ochosays:

July 16, 2014 at 7:47 pm