Posted July 16, 2014 by Brad Roberts & filed under .
I like it as well as the entire lyric up to day 11 but “planet” keeps not resonating with me – may i suggest in place of “the planet” one of these using “our instead of “the” – harmony chorus amity society species race dynasty tribe empire commonwealth
Thanks for the kudos on my previous lyric.
i agree, i desperately needed some direction. great lyric, you’re pretty good at this stuff, you know?
*focused – (oops, haha)
I see it, too, Brad. I think we’ve all been a bit more focised on our own emotions, rather than thinking in the third “person” sense, as it were, when assesing this scene…myself, included. LOL!! Liked>>>
Thanks for the shout out and the historic mention. I’m also in Dash and the Dots now for your information! But seriously I’m now seeing more of your lyrical direction.