Renee814

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  • Beth Nielsen Chapman

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"Good stuff in this..."

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Lyric by Renee814:

"You're never gonna change my mind / no matter what you say or do / (I'm) listening to my heart just one more time / (and) It's telling me to say "goodbye" to you."

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"Good stuff in this..."

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Lyric by Renee814:

"You're never gonna change my mind / no matter what you say or do / (I'm) listening to my heart just one more time / (and) It's telling me to say "goodbye" to you."

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"engraved in my heart is a nice phrase...but overall you've got too many syllables to fit into the melody..."

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Lyric by Renee814:

"You're never gonna change mind / the love is just too deep inside my soul / engraved in my heart since the beginning of time / I am never gonna let you go"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"oooh! Totally new twist!

Now serve the melody! second line doesn't have the right amount of syllables or cadence.

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"Your love is like a _ _ in my soul"
(river? valley?)
or is it
"your love is like the...in my soul"?
(magic?)
or is it
"your love is like the....of my soul"?
(vision?)

"engraved" is a great word but where it sits on the melody pulls the seams...what's another way to say that?"

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Lyric by Renee814:

"I'm never gonna change my mind / your love too deep inside my soul / engraved by the hands of time /I'm never gonna let it go"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"I like the "o" rhyme...but pretty sure it's ABAB as I go through these...like the idea of getting "heart" and "soul" in this song to compare to the "mind""

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Lyric by Renee814:

"You're never gonna change my mind / beliefs engraved by the hands of time / way down deep inside my soul / And I am never gonna let them go"

My Lyrics

Written for:

  • Beth Nielsen Chapman
  • Clay Mills
Can you hear the whispers of hope / echoing from my soul/ still trying to convince you / I don't want to let you go

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The quiver is now empty / no more arrows left for me to draw / your heart no longer a target / I've given it my all

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The quiver is now empty / No more arrows left to draw / There's nothing more I can say / I've given it my all

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Well, I could state my case / try to win you over / no matter what I say / you refuse to be mine / the quiver is now empty / no more arrows left for me to draw / No, I'm never gonna change your mind.
Well, I could state my case/try to win you over/ but no matter what I say/ I'm just wastin' my time/ The quiver is now empty / no more arrows left for me to draw / I gave it my all / But I'm never gonna change your mind
Well, I tried to win you over / I gave it my all / but now the quiver is empty / mo more arrows left for me to draw / No matter what I say or do / it seems like I'm just wastin' my time / Cause no matter how hard I try / I/m never gonna change your mind
Well, I could state my case / try to win you over/ but no matter what I say / I just can't make you mine / the quiver is now empty / no more arrows left for me to draw / No, I'm never gonna change your mind
You're not gonna change my mind / the wall around my heart you just can't break through

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You're never gonna change my mind / no matter what you say or do / (I'm) listening to my heart just one more time / (and) It's telling me to say "goodbye" to you.
You're never gonna change my mind / the wall around my heart you can't break through / my love for you too deep inside / I'm just not gonna say goodbye to you
You're never gonna change mind / the love is just too deep inside my soul / engraved in my heart since the beginning of time / I am never gonna let you go
You're never gonna change my mind / my heart tells me what I should do / the love we share was just too hard to find / I am never gonna say goodbye to you
I'm not gonna change my mind / My heartbeat tells me all I need to know

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I'm never gonna change my mind / been listening to my heart all this time / the love I feel tells me all I need to know/ And I'm never gonna let you go

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I'm never gonna change my mind / My heart has held you for such a long time / the love so deep inside my soul / I'm just not gonna let you go

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You're never gonna change my mind / the love is just so deep inside my soul
I'm never gonna change my mind / your love too deep inside my soul / engraved by the hands of time /I'm never gonna let it go
You're never gonna change my mind / beliefs too deep inside my soul / engraved by the hands of time/ I'm never gonna let them go

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You're never gonna change my mind / beliefs engraved by the hands of time

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You're never gonna change my mind / The love we have just too hard to find / so very deep inside my soul / I'm never gonna let it go

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You're never gonna change my mind / beliefs engraved by the hands of time / way down deep inside my soul / And I am never gonna let them go
And I'm gonna miss / the sweet taste of love on my lips

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And I'm gonna miss / the sweet taste of love on your lips

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And what I miss / is the taste of your love on my lips

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And the suitcase of memories / sill left to unpack

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The scars on my lips are still healing

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But all that's left are the scars that aren't healing
The passion so hot / couldn't turn down the thermostat/All thats left are the scars on my lips/ There ain't no kiss I'd wanna take back
The scars on my lips are all that is left

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The scars on my lips remind me of you

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All that's left now are the scars on my lips / There ain't one kiss I'd wanna take back
Whatever we had is not something I will miss / and (There Ain't) One Kiss I'd Wanna Take Back
I can hear your heartbeat too/coming from that photograph
A Photograph of Love

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I can hear your heartbeat too / coming from that photograph

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There were no regrets, no one to blame, it was beyond our control. For me this was a blessing in disguise, when you decided to let me go.

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