Renee814

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  • Beth Nielsen Chapman

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"yes we are having a lot of the same words...but there is only one perfect way to organize them! accents HAVE to be on the right syllable. Everyone is being great about using the 5 syllables but for instance "A flicker of Light" the "A" is accented in the melody. so that sounds awkward. It would fit better just saying "flicker of light" but then you are less conversational ---same thing with "is a" starting the first line. Pulls at the seams. but I LOVE "tiny" and "spark" together in the line. how can you get it to sing better?"

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Lyric by Renee814:

"a flicker in the dark"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"yes we are having a lot of the same words...but there is only one perfect way to organize them! accents HAVE to be on the right syllable. Everyone is being great about using the 5 syllables but for instance "A flicker of Light" the "A" is accented in the melody. so that sounds awkward. It would fit better just saying "flicker of light" but then you are less conversational ---same thing with "is a" starting the first line. Pulls at the seams. but I LOVE "tiny" and "spark" together in the line. how can you get it to sing better?"

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Lyric by Renee814:

"a flicker in the dark"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"Good stuff in this..."

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Lyric by Renee814:

"You're never gonna change my mind / no matter what you say or do / (I'm) listening to my heart just one more time / (and) It's telling me to say "goodbye" to you."

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"engraved in my heart is a nice phrase...but overall you've got too many syllables to fit into the melody..."

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Lyric by Renee814:

"You're never gonna change mind / the love is just too deep inside my soul / engraved in my heart since the beginning of time / I am never gonna let you go"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"oooh! Totally new twist!

Now serve the melody! second line doesn't have the right amount of syllables or cadence.

Play with this:


"Your love is like a _ _ in my soul"
(river? valley?)
or is it
"your love is like the...in my soul"?
(magic?)
or is it
"your love is like the....of my soul"?
(vision?)

"engraved" is a great word but where it sits on the melody pulls the seams...what's another way to say that?"

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Lyric by Renee814:

"I'm never gonna change my mind / your love too deep inside my soul / engraved by the hands of time /I'm never gonna let it go"

Beth Nielsen Chapman commented on Renee814's lyric:

"I like the "o" rhyme...but pretty sure it's ABAB as I go through these...like the idea of getting "heart" and "soul" in this song to compare to the "mind""

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Lyric by Renee814:

"You're never gonna change my mind / beliefs engraved by the hands of time / way down deep inside my soul / And I am never gonna let them go"

My Lyrics

Written for:

  • Marti Dodson
  • Beth Nielsen Chapman
  • Clay Mills
I'll embrace each sunrise / Give the sunset a goodnight kiss

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I'll embrace each moment with a hug and kiss
Embrace each moment with a hug and a kiss
Embrace all of the emotions I once chose to resist

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Embrace all the beauty this life chooses to give
I'll take more chances /I'll embrace all the risks
I will take more chances, I will (I'll?) embrace the risks

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Embrace the passion in each and every kiss

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Ignite the passion with each and every kiss

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But now all that is left / are tiny grains of regret/ Moments of remorse/that have paved my life's course / Wish I could've changed it somehow
Today I will let my heart sing/ 'cause nobody knows what tomorrow will bring
From the cradle to the grave / we are given a number of days

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From the cradle to the grave/ we are given a number of days / some get less / some get more / Life is short
Shimmers of hope / reflect in your soul / flames of truth / ready to ignite / maybe this light/ will change your heart and all that's inside / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind
Shimmers of hope / reflect in your soul / flames of truth /ready to ignite /maybe this light /will change your heart and what is inside /'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind
I'll take a breath / from tryin' to convince you / no more words / nothing left to say / You and I / will never see eye to eye / I'm never gonna change your mind

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So, I show my cards (PatriciaA) / Lay'em on the table (PatriciaA) / play my hand / just one more time/ the game is over / we're just two-of-a-kind / 'Cause I'm never gonna change your mind
Shimmers of hope / reflect in your soul / ignites the truth / you choose to deny / your heart is the torch / that will bring you to the other side / but I'm never gonna change your mind

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Shimmers of hope / reflect in your soul / glimmers of truth / you cannot deny / I'm holding the torch / to lead you to the other side / but I'm never gonna change your mind
Soft shimmers of hope / still reflect in your soul / ignites the truth /it can no longer hide / Set yourself free / from all you choose to deny / but I'm never gonna change your mind
Shimmers of hope / still reflect in your soul / the flame still burns / it can no longer hide / let the truth set you free / from all you choose to deny / but I'm never gonna change your ind
Soft shimmers of hope / reflect in you soul /the flame still burns / it just won't let you go/ Let the truth bring you freedom / from all that you choose to deny/ but I'm never gonna change your mind

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a flicker in the dark
Burns a tiny spark / shimmers (or flickers) of soft light/ reveals in the dark / the notion that I might / might just / might be right
Burns a tiny spark / soft flicker (or shimmer?) of light / reveals in the dark / the notion that I might / might just / might be right

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There are tiny sparks / soft flickers of light / revealing the dark / the notion that I might/ might just / might be right
There are tiny sparks / soft shimmers of light / reveals in the dark / the notion that I might / might just / might be right

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I take a step / tryin' to get closer / on the path of hope / But I get denied / No regrets /I'll walk on to the other side / But I'm not going to change your mind

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Chains of doubt / holdin' you captive / uncertain words / embrace you tight / let's work things out / you know that it's time / I'm not gonna change your mind

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Chains of doubt / holdin' you captive / uncertain words / embrace you tight / Set yourself free / you know that it's time /I'm never gonna change your mind
The story goes on / another chapter written /words of hope / so sweet and sublime/ turn the page / read between the lines / Am I ever gonna change your mind?

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The story goes on / another chapter written /words of hope/ so sweet and sublime / the love is gone / the ink in my pen has dried / I'm not gonna change your mind
The story goes on / another chapter written / words of hope / so sweet and sublime / truth is the pen / but you only read the lies / I'm not gonna change your mind

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The story goes on /Another chapter written / words of hope / so sweet and sublime /Truth is the pen / but no matter what I write / I'm not gonna change your mind

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I'll stand my ground / tryin' to convince you / speak word of hope / so sweet and sublime / there's a truth to be found / but you're lost in the lies / I'm never gonna change your mind
I stand my ground/ tryin' to convince you / speak words of hope / just one more time / But on this path /No bridge to be found / no road of compromise / I'm never gonna change your mind

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I'm standin' on this road of hope /But I can't see a common ground / So many miles between our souls / Maybe there's a bridge here to be found
I'm standin' on the road of hope / But there is no common ground / Too many miles between our souls/Where compromise just can't be found
I'm holding a torch in the dark / So that you and I can both see / There's still hope inside my heart /A hope that will set us free
I'm standing on the edge of hope / With a promise I will always keep /So listen to the message of my soul / It is one that will set us free

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I'm fighting a losing battle / one that I will never win / My soul is about to surrender / My heart is ready to give in
I'm standing on the edge of hope / with a promise that I will always keep / I'm just not ready to let you go / the passion still burns so deep
I am standing on the edge of hope / with a promise I will always keep / I'm not ready to say goodbye / because the desire still burns deep

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I am standing on the edge of hope / with a promise I will always keep / I'm not ready to say goodbye /the desire to hold on is just too deep

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I'm standing on the edge of hope /Just not willing to give in / the battle rages in our hearts/ who will be the one destined to win?

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I'm standing on the edge of hope / not willing to just give in / I know that it's a battle /who will be destined to win?

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I'm standing on the edge of hope / not willing to just give in /I know that it's gonna be a battle / not sure of who's gonna win

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Can you hear the whispers of hope / echoing from my soul/ still trying to convince you / I don't want to let you go

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The quiver is now empty / no more arrows left for me to draw / your heart no longer a target / I've given it my all

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The quiver is now empty / No more arrows left to draw / There's nothing more I can say / I've given it my all

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Well, I could state my case / try to win you over / no matter what I say / you refuse to be mine / the quiver is now empty / no more arrows left for me to draw / No, I'm never gonna change your mind.
Well, I could state my case/try to win you over/ but no matter what I say/ I'm just wastin' my time/ The quiver is now empty / no more arrows left for me to draw / I gave it my all / But I'm never gonna change your mind
Well, I tried to win you over / I gave it my all / but now the quiver is empty / mo more arrows left for me to draw / No matter what I say or do / it seems like I'm just wastin' my time / Cause no matter how hard I try / I/m never gonna change your mind
Well, I could state my case / try to win you over/ but no matter what I say / I just can't make you mine / the quiver is now empty / no more arrows left for me to draw / No, I'm never gonna change your mind
You're not gonna change my mind / the wall around my heart you just can't break through

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You're never gonna change my mind / no matter what you say or do / (I'm) listening to my heart just one more time / (and) It's telling me to say "goodbye" to you.
You're never gonna change my mind / the wall around my heart you can't break through / my love for you too deep inside / I'm just not gonna say goodbye to you
You're never gonna change mind / the love is just too deep inside my soul / engraved in my heart since the beginning of time / I am never gonna let you go
You're never gonna change my mind / my heart tells me what I should do / the love we share was just too hard to find / I am never gonna say goodbye to you
I'm not gonna change my mind / My heartbeat tells me all I need to know

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I'm never gonna change my mind / been listening to my heart all this time / the love I feel tells me all I need to know/ And I'm never gonna let you go

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I'm never gonna change my mind / My heart has held you for such a long time / the love so deep inside my soul / I'm just not gonna let you go

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You're never gonna change my mind / the love is just so deep inside my soul
I'm never gonna change my mind / your love too deep inside my soul / engraved by the hands of time /I'm never gonna let it go
You're never gonna change my mind / beliefs too deep inside my soul / engraved by the hands of time/ I'm never gonna let them go

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You're never gonna change my mind / beliefs engraved by the hands of time

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You're never gonna change my mind / The love we have just too hard to find / so very deep inside my soul / I'm never gonna let it go

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You're never gonna change my mind / beliefs engraved by the hands of time / way down deep inside my soul / And I am never gonna let them go
And I'm gonna miss / the sweet taste of love on my lips

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And I'm gonna miss / the sweet taste of love on your lips

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And what I miss / is the taste of your love on my lips

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And the suitcase of memories / sill left to unpack

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The scars on my lips are still healing

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But all that's left are the scars that aren't healing
The passion so hot / couldn't turn down the thermostat/All thats left are the scars on my lips/ There ain't no kiss I'd wanna take back
The scars on my lips are all that is left

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The scars on my lips remind me of you

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All that's left now are the scars on my lips / There ain't one kiss I'd wanna take back
Whatever we had is not something I will miss / and (There Ain't) One Kiss I'd Wanna Take Back
I can hear your heartbeat too/coming from that photograph
A Photograph of Love

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I can hear your heartbeat too / coming from that photograph

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There were no regrets, no one to blame, it was beyond our control. For me this was a blessing in disguise, when you decided to let me go.

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